I have found that technology has changed the way we communicate in writing, and it has affected tone most obviously. I don't expect you to write like an astrophysicist (please don't), but we do want to keep an academic tone, not a colloquial one, in our academic essays. The tone of our essays should be different from the tone of our casual emails and text messages.
Generally, the most significant factors in regard to tone are pronouns (particularly second-person reference--you, your, yourself) and colloquialisms (vocabulary we'd use during a conversation over lunch with a friend).
It is difficult to recognize colloquial language, particularly slang and cliché phrases, because we use these words so often that they don't sound colloquial anymore. Here are some examples:
- lay it on the table
- right off the bat
- buy into it
- in the long run
- pull it over on them
- a lot
- screw up
- plain and simple
- get the point across
- be honest and forthright
- immediately
- agree with
- ultimately
- deliberately deceive or manipulate
- often, several, many
- err, make a mistake
- simply
- convince


Because I have to write often for school, I try not to use colloquial language. It can get frustrating when i write a paper and I know that something does not sound correct, but I cannot think of the correct way to write it.
ReplyDeleteOne example of colloquialism that came to mind was "beat around the bush". Often, people do not want others they are conversing with to "beat around the bush". They would like them to get to the point. Instead of saying,
"Don't beat around the bush",
"Don't avoid the point" could be stated instead. "Get to the point", could also be said.
work sticks instead of saying I don't like work
ReplyDeletegonna=going to
wanna=want to
cause=because
dude=friend
chill=relax or be around
Great examples! Pedro gave several!
ReplyDeleteKeep adding, everyone :)
Reading this discussion topic made me laugh because it made me realize how technology has really effected how we communicate our thoughts. I think technology has made it more convenient to get straight to the point without spending a large amount of time.
ReplyDelete"So, what's the scoop?" - What are the details?
"Dish it out"- "Spill the beans"- "bring it to the table" These have similar meanings, instead you could use words like, explain, confess, contribute.
Here are some of the most common colloquialisms I hear and what could be said instead:
ReplyDeleteWhat's up/What's good?-What are you doing?
How's it going?-How are you?
Hanging out-Spending time together
Have a good one-Have a good day
The common ones that I use or hear everyday.
ReplyDeleteCool!- Excellent! Good!
No worries- not a problem
Whatever!-I don't care!
There are so many!
ReplyDelete"What's up?" instead of "How are you?"
"Beat around the bush" meaning deliberately avoiding discussing something.
"Bite the bullet" meaning to take action and not delay in doing something.
"Can of worms" meaning some sort of trouble.
"Let the cat out of the bag" meaning to tell the truth, usually accidentally.
"Go postal" meaning to act out in rage.
"Think outside the box" meaning to come up with ideas that are out of the ordinary.
"Take it easy" meaning to relax.
I just realized that I can access this blog from my cellphone, so I was able to read all of the comments and reply while rocking my baby to sleep. Awesome!
Haha, another perk of online learning! I'm so glad this is working for you and your family :)
DeleteWow! There are already so many great examples listed here. A couple I have not seen listed are: "what it do?"- what are you doing? "come through"- come to where I am. "hit me up"- call me.
ReplyDeleteYou all have excellent examples! (If only we can keep them out of our writing. . . .)
ReplyDeleteKeep sharing! And share NEW examples that haven't been shared already.
Some I haven't read: "Pain in the neck", " that was a bummer", "You should get lost", "I messed up"
ReplyDeletePersonally, I use "I messed up" very frequently. For example: "I was so stressed that I messed up the whole project."
The alternative: "I was so stressed out that I made many mistakes on the project."
Good one, Octavio! How else would you say "pain in the neck"? :)
DeleteThe phrase could be alternately expressed, "The task was monotonous."
DeleteCome on - That's hard to believe.
ReplyDeletesick - exciting
cool - interesting
What are you up to? - What are you currently working on?
That sucks - I'm sorry to hear that.
As a tutor, it always aggrivates me when I read papers that contain slang. One time, a student wrote "Global warming sucks because..." I asked the student, "How does global warming suck? Does global warming use a straw?" The student laughed and said "No, it's just, like, really really bad."
ReplyDeleteSome colloquialisms I see are:
Paint the town read- Have a good time
That's rough- that's unfortunate
Up to par- at someone's expectations.
I don't really like reading essays that are written in the first person. I know that it can be difficult to write in the third person, but in most cases it sounds better that way. I also prefer to read essays written in a passive voice. A colloquialism that bothers me is the use of contractions in formal writing. A contraction can make an elegant sentence sound informal.
ReplyDeleteI think the most common colloquialism I use is "That's cool!". Thinking about saying just seems silly but it's surprising how many times I say that or hear it said every day. No that new pair of shoes you bought are not cold or that app on your phone, I'm not feeling them so I should probably say, "That's interesting!" or "Those are pretty!".
ReplyDeleteI've used my fair share of slang words but I try as much as possible to keep the terms out of my papers. Here are a few that I can thing of:
ReplyDeleteThat's awesome! - That's great!
I am beat. - I am exhausted.
That jacket is grungy. - That jacket is dirty.
If you don't hustle, we'll be late. - If you don't hurry up, we'll be late.
She gets hyper. - She gets overly excited.
Your recipe was a hit! - Your recipe was a success!
When it comes to slang works and cliches I try really hard to avoid them in my academic papers. In the critique paper I accidentally used the phrase, "come to a head," which means something becomes so bad that one must deal with it. So instead of using "coming to a head" i could say, "The problem started to get out of control, so he was ultimately forced to deal with it.
ReplyDeleteAlso, I'm use the phrase, "that's awesome" a little bit to much. Instead I should say, "that is wonderful." The list could go on for awhile but those are just a few that I use quite a bit in my writing.
Some additional examples include:
ReplyDeleteThat's sick - That is amazing
Looking fly - You look absolutely gorgeous
Would you like to tag along with us - Would you like to accompany us?
Instead of "like a fish out of water" we could say "in an unfamiliar situation".
ReplyDeleteInstead of "no-brainer" we could say "requires a minimum of thought".
Instead of "hole in the wall" we could say "a small, low quality establishment".
Hah. I think one of my favorite ones at the moment is "right on." The meaning seems to vary a lot depending on the context, but I tend to use it for things like, I understand your perspective and can respect that, and, congratulations/good job/etc.
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